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chicoryPosted: 2009-07-03 13:23
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20 Posts		kneeling, i am all new
my arms and legs askew
breathing into you

i unfold like a lucky crane
no crumples, only delicate folds
and rise to meet you

this is no time for blushing
but i cannot seem to help
that rise of heat in my cheeks

i live two lives, and more,
in every moment these days
every blink transports me

here i am, bound and free
and there i am, free and bound
but only here is it my choice

the words come and come
to the tips of my fingers
while my tongue remains still

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BaronslairPosted: 2009-07-03 13:33
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6,698 Posts		If you keep writing like this,you're going to make a couple of
members whom think they can actually write........very nervous!.
A literary blowjob completed to perfection.....it was great!

_approve_approve_approve

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chicoryPosted: 2009-07-03 13:37
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20 Posts		Thank you, Baronslair! I am going through a very exciting/tumultuous time in my life and that definitely lends something to my writing. Everything I write here is present and straight from my brain, very little editing. (Too lazy to edit!)
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BaronslairPosted: 2009-07-03 13:46
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6,698 Posts
twistygirl:
Thank you, Baronslair! I am going through a very exciting/tumultuous time in my life and that definitely lends something to my writing. Everything I write here is present and straight from my brain, very little editing. (Too lazy to edit!)

Worry about structure as a last resort......just keep writing
the thoughts that come from your mind.The readers will actually read you,unlike some others in this group.
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bloodelfgirlPosted: 2009-07-03 16:27
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18 Posts		Really nice. It was beautifully written.
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chicoryPosted: 2009-07-03 17:06
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20 Posts		Thank you, bloodelfgirl. I am happy some people have enjoyed this.
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miss_sladePosted: 2009-07-03 20:29
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1,812 Posts		i like this vary much
well said and put!!._blush

hugs._blush

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bondagedreamrPosted: 2009-07-04 05:35
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167 Posts		Brava!
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vegassongbirdPosted: 2009-07-04 14:41
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284 Posts		very strong.
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When I'm sad, she comes to me
Take anything that you want, anything.
'"Little Wing" by Jimi Hendrix
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sugarsub1oooPosted: 2009-07-04 15:09
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36 Posts		I like this very much
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chicoryPosted: 2009-07-04 15:29
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20 Posts		Thank you all. I hope to post some more when a fresh wave of inspiration hits me.
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o0o_Suzi_Uzi_o0oPosted: 2009-07-05 07:54
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359 Posts		I'm really diggin' the straightforwardness of your writing. Great imagery & feelings evoked. I can't wait to read more.
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bunnylustPosted: 2009-07-05 17:00
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256 Posts		me too! i actually really enjoy reading it. straight forward, double and triple meanings that all come together - love it!
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The objective: to transcend our own individual limiting beliefs; to stand in all our bare beauty....without the pretenses of playing pieces
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chicoryPosted: 2009-07-06 06:21
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20 Posts		bunnylust & Suzi_Uzi, I have always thought "straightforward" might be a euphemism for "simple" but in any case I can't really write any other way. I really appreciate your comments and like that you find the more subtle meanings of some of the phrases.
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